It looked pretty messy. Especially the backgrounds. Looking back at the original pilot the only real difference I could see was the backgrounds. Also, it gave me no idea of what to expect from the show. You should have instead made a whole episode or at least a short with dialouge. That way it would be easier to gauge what style to show has. Looking back at your last video's you said that you didn't have a tablet but that shouldn't be an excuse for low quality animation.
Hope to see more from you so I can accurately judge your show. :)