It was a bit slow paced but I liked it anyways. The animation was pretty good too.
The drawings were rough as shit and the animation was nothing but TWeening. On top of that it wasn't that funy. :/
*funny. and it all depends on your humor preferences. also, tweening is awesome.
Why waste such lovely animation on such a lame joke? C'mon, you can do better than memes!
It looked pretty messy. Especially the backgrounds. Looking back at the original pilot the only real difference I could see was the backgrounds. Also, it gave me no idea of what to expect from the show. You should have instead made a whole episode or at least a short with dialouge. That way it would be easier to gauge what style to show has. Looking back at your last video's you said that you didn't have a tablet but that shouldn't be an excuse for low quality animation.
Hope to see more from you so I can accurately judge your show. :)
Yeah, I still don't have a tablet, I could pretty much use one at my school.
Also, we are having an official first episode, it's a Christmas Special.
I have a Ã¢"Â¢Pablo's Corner wikia for all the info on that episode.
It was just a 5 second thing that involved very little animation besides tweening.
Was that meant to go somewhere?
Gee you don't HORSE around!
But seriously, I like the animation. The horses dumb face cracks me up, it's fluid etc. But I don't think Newgrounds is the place for little animation tests like this. But hey, it looks good! Hope to see an actual animation from you someday.
Sorry if I sounded mean in that review but lately I've been feeling a little HORSE.
Like the guy below said, it looks a lot like Eddsworlds flash "just a bit crazy" and, bar the guy with the Goggles, the people look like the Eddsworld characters too.
The animation looked awkward. Was this your first time experimenting in flash? There is a lot of jerky tweening going on and also the characters look really rough.
BTW why would you make an intro to a series that has no name or episodes? Would you not just make an episode THEN make an intro to it? This gave me no idea of what to expect from the show or characters, except that there are three guys. That do things.
I'm sure you have plans for something that could be really good but this just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Hope you improve next time 'round.
It was really just me experimenting in flash and also, I did all of the art with a mouse. It wasnt originaly going to be an intro But I made it going to be the intro for the first one anyways. I will try to improve i've been find any way possible to improve.
The animation keeps changing from really fluid to no motion whats so ever. And the audio quality wasn't good. Took a couple watchings to hear what they were saying. Also, implement a play button. Having it loop over and over is annoying.
Yeah i know what u mean.
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